The Girls of Hillcrest Farm; Or, The Secret of the Rocks — A Closer Reading
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They were four flights up. There were twenty-three other families in this "double-decker." A fire in the house was the oldest Bray girl's nightmare by night and haunting spectre by day.
Lydia just couldn't get used to these quarters, and they had been here now three months. The old, quiet home on the edge of town had been so different. To it she had returned from college so short a time ago to see her mother die and find their affairs in a state of chaos.
For her father was one of those men who leave everything to the capable management of their wives. Euphemia, or "'Phemie," was only a schoolgirl, then, in her junior year at high school; "Lyddy" was a sophomore at Littleburg when her mother died, and she had never gone back.
She couldn't. There were two very good reasons why her own and even 'Phemie's education had to cease abruptly. Their mother's income, derived from their grandmother's estate, ceased with her death. They could not live, let alone pursue education "on the heights," upon Mr. Bray's wages as overseer in one of the rooms of the hat factory.
"Mother's hundred dollars a month was just the difference between poverty and comfort," Lyddy had decided, when she took the strings of the household into her own hands.
"I haven't that hundred dollars a month; father makes but fifteen dollars weekly; _you_ will have to go to work at something, 'Phemie, and so will I."
And no longer could they pay twenty-five dollars a month house rent. Lyddy had first placed her sister with a millinery firm at six dollars weekly, and had then found this modest tenement about half-way between her father's factory and 'Phemie's millinery shop, so that it would be equally handy for both workers.
As for herself, Lyddy wished to obtain some employment that would occupy only a part of her day, and in this she had been unsuccessful as yet. She religiously bought a paper every morning, and went through the "help wanted" columns, answering every one that looked promising. She had tried many kinds of "work at home for ladies," and canvassing, and the like. The latter did not pay for shoe-leather, and the "work at home" people were mostly swindlers. Lyddy was no needle-woman, so she could not make anything as a seamstress.
She had promised her mother to keep the family together and make a home for her father. Mr. Bray was not well. For almost two years now the doctor had been warning him to get out of the factory and into some other business. The felt-dust was hurting him.
He had come in but the minute before and had at once gone to lie down, exhausted by his climb up the four flights of stairs. 'Phemie had not yet returned from work, for it was nearing Easter, despite the rawness of the days, and the millinery shop was busy until late. They always waited supper for 'Phemie.
Now, when Lyddy ran to the window at the raucous shriek of the ladder-truck siren, she hoped she would see her sister turning the corner into the avenue, where the electric arc-light threw a great circle of radiance upon the wet walk.
But although there was the usual crowd at the corner, and all seemed to be in a hurry to-night, Lyddy saw nothing of either her sister or the ladder-truck. She went back to the kitchen, satisfied that the fire apparatus had not swung into their street, so the tenement must be safe for the time being.
She finished laying the table for supper. Once she looked up. There was that man at the window again!
That is, he _would_ be a man some day, Lyddy told herself. But she believed, big as he was, he was just a hobbledehoy-boy. He was a boy who, if one looked at him, just _had_ to smile. And he was always working in a white apron and brown straw cuff-shields at that window which was a little above the level of Lyddy's kitchen window.
Lyddy Bray abominated flirting and such silly practises. And although the boy at the window was really good to look upon--cleanly shaven, rosy-cheeked, with good eyes set wide apart, and a firm, broad chin--Lyddy did not like to see him every time she raised her eyes from her own kitchen tasks.
Often, even on dark days, she drew the shade down so that she should have more privacy. For sometimes the young man looked idly out of the window and Lyddy believed that, had she given him any encouragement, he would have opened his own window and spoken to her.
The novel opens with Lydia Bray's recurring fear of fire, a detail that immediately establishes her as the anxious, responsible older sister. The narrative voice shifts between Lydia's interior worries and brisk dialogue with her younger sister 'Phemie, creating a rhythm of tension and release. The first chapter's title, 'Everything at Once!', signals the compressed pacing: within a few pages, the reader learns of the mother's death, the family's reduced circumstances, and the move to a cramped tenement.
Voice and Perspective
The narration stays close to Lydia's point of view, filtering events through her practical yet fretful mind. Phrases like 'Lyddy just couldn’t get used to these quarters' and 'she had never gone back' reveal her internal conflict through indirect discourse. The narrator occasionally steps back to offer summary, as in 'There were two very good reasons why her own and even ’Phemie’s education had to cease abruptly,' but quickly returns to Lydia's immediate reactions. This focalization gives the reader access to her calculations—'Mother’s hundred dollars a month was just the difference between poverty and comfort'—while keeping other characters, like the father, at a slight distance.
Pacing Through Domestic Detail
The early chapters alternate between urgent action and quiet planning. The fire alarm scene in Chapter I is swift and sensory—'the siren of the ladder-truck'—but the narrative then slows to inventory the family's finances and living arrangements. This pattern repeats: a crisis (the fire, the move to Hillcrest) is followed by extended passages of deliberation, such as Lydia's rumination over Harris Colesworth's letter. The pacing mirrors the sisters' own rhythm of panic and problem-solving. The author uses short paragraphs for moments of decision and longer, more descriptive ones for reflection, as when John Bray appreciates 'the mellow, refreshing air that blew over the hills.'
Recurring Motifs and Structural Cues
Two motifs recur in the excerpts: fire and letters. The opening fear of fire returns in the mention of the Trimble Avenue tenement fire, linking the city's dangers to the family's escape. Letters drive the plot—Lydia's advertisement for boarders, Harris Colesworth's reply—and each letter introduces a new complication. The chapter titles ('Aunt Jane Proposes,' 'The Doctor Disposes') hint at a symmetrical, almost theatrical structure. The catalog subject 'Motherless families' and 'Boardinghouses' suggest that the domestic sphere will remain central, with the farm itself becoming a character through descriptions of 'the mellow, refreshing air' and plans for a cow and hens.
Readers attentive to voice will notice how Lydia's internal monologue gradually expands to include her father's and sister's perspectives as the family adapts to Hillcrest. The pacing, driven by letters and practical decisions, rewards those who track small details—like the cost of eggs or the hiring of Lucas Pritchett—as clues to the larger mystery hinted at in the subtitle.
I have always cherished how the Hillcrest sisters found resolve by turning worn soil into shelter, and it reminds me of another quiet constancy—that of a soul holding fast through harder days in For the Master's Sake: A Story of the Days of Queen Mary — A Closer Reading. Both stories whisper of steadfastness, each page a small, steady hand.
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